Rough Draft # 1

"Embacadaro Park. Never heard of it.", I said as my friend, J., his mom, and her new boyfriend were taking me to Embacadaro Park which was soon to be an experience in my life. So as we were driving, he told me that it was a Switchfoot concert. Cool, I thought. I didn't really care for Switchfoot, but I knew it still was going to be fun.

As we arrive, I see a bunch of 91X flyers and a big sign that says: 91X FM LIVE IN EMBACADARO! I couldn't believe my eyes. It turns out to be a radio station concert with live bands! When we get out of the car, we see all types of people: indie, punk, grunge, etc.! We were hungry so we went to get food from the consession stand. As soon as I get to the food stand, it says SPAM Sandwiches. I HATE SPAM! So were looking and looking, until we find a pizza and hot dog stand. So I bought 2 slices of cheese pizza.


After we ate, the real fun began as we went to the concert stage. My friend see's a guy running all over and dancing. After 20 minutes, he askes, "Are you drunk!?". The guy shook his head, "No".

The concert was just getting in to action when a mosh pit started to break out right next to us. There were two guys fighting be cause one of them "accidentally" hit the other guy on the head with a cup. So here's us, a mosh pit, and two guys fighting over a paper cup. The one of the guys threw the cup and it hit me on the head.

It's 8:00. The concert is old and still no Switchfoot. Then people start to smoke who-ever knows what. I started to get sick so his mom had to take me home and I missed Switchfoot which was what we were here for. That's a bummer!